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Post by horsecrav202 on Apr 30, 2009 16:57:32 GMT -5
Dusk
I galloped into the land. My powerful body moving quickly and swiftly. I reared, then shouted "I claim this land as my own!"
I stood looking out at my land. Then galloped around the area, exploring.
It was a nice land, perfect for raising a herd. Now I set out to find my queen.
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Post by MeMyself&I on Apr 30, 2009 20:32:23 GMT -5
I heard another stallion had just claimed my sub lands! I was outrage! I gallope dinto the land my black eyes were glowing blood red from anger. "How DARE YOU! You brute" I squealed as I slid to a stop in from of him. "No one claims my sub lands without my permission. HOW DARE YOU!" I growled. My ravens landed around me. The sky grew darker and lightning and thunder raged on. |
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Post by horsecrav202 on Apr 30, 2009 20:39:48 GMT -5
Dusk
I reared, startled. I hadn't realized and now I was in trouble. I tried not to show my fear, but it was too late.
I didnt know what to say, but I managed something. "I didn't know...Im sorry, I was looking for herd and found this place." I backed away a few steps, hoping we could talk it over.
Apparently this wasnt going to happen, I glanced at the sky, thunder boomed, and lightning was bright all around us.
When I calmed down, I said to him "Could we talk this over? Im sure we could make a great herd together..." I hoped I didnt sound like a whimp, but Im sure I did.
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Post by MeMyself&I on Apr 30, 2009 20:47:14 GMT -5
I reared. Lightenting cacked across the sky making my ebony coat shine in is dim light. "FOOL! Do you know who I am" I hissed. My raven croaked and screeched all around us. I landed and thunder souded as my hooves hit the ground. "Talk!" I demanded |
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Post by horsecrav202 on Apr 30, 2009 20:49:57 GMT -5
I backed away again.
"Yes, I know who you are, I didnt know this land was claimed, now I am asking you if I could sub-herd it." I knew he would probably say no because of the stupid move I just made.
"I didn't wish to cause a problem."
I bowed slightly...
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Post by MeMyself&I on Apr 30, 2009 20:53:07 GMT -5
Darkness
I snorted and arched my neck. My muscles rippled. "Tell me why you think you are worthy" I snorted. My ebony orbs shone black again. I snorted my breath coming out in a puff of fog. It was getting cold. My dark coat shone brightly. I pinned my ears back. I knew I was a force. I was muscular and tall.
Rocky
I had begged my dad to come with him to see this stallion but now I was scared. I was still a baby. I missed my mom so much! But now all I had was my dad and his new queen. I snorted at the thought of her. She would never be my mother. I peeked my head out of the bush I was in. I looked nothing like my father. I was pure white and had bight blue eyes. I snapped my head realizing that he would see me easily in this dark light |
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Post by horsecrav202 on May 1, 2009 6:33:40 GMT -5
Dusk
"I'm strong, and I am not afraid to fight. I will take commands from you. And I won't disrespect you, your queen, or your herd." I said
"I will leave right now if you do not want me on your land."
Then a little colt walked in, he was pure white, his eyes were blue. I wondered where his mother was, but I kept to myself.
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Post by MeMyself&I on May 1, 2009 9:47:53 GMT -5
I snorted adn the storm started to disappear. The thunder rolled away. The sky ofcourse was always dark but it was lighter then pitch black. I flicked my ears back and forth and watched him carefully through my ebony orbs. I arched my neck and pawed the ground. "You have to the land. But you better kep up to your word, as I will keep up to mine" I snorted. I watched and waited for his reply |
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Post by horsecrav202 on May 1, 2009 15:17:01 GMT -5
I nodded "Thank you. I will keep all my promises." OCC: Are your laws the same as mine now? Or do I make my own? (Sorry, first time claiming a land and whatnot  ) |
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Post by MeMyself&I on May 1, 2009 15:33:15 GMT -5
OOC: it's cool. But ummm yeah I geuss about having the same laws. Well you cna have your own laws but most people have the same anyway
I flicked my ears backand forth and snorted.
OOC: Tell me what you want your sub boards to be
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Post by horsecrav202 on May 1, 2009 15:43:05 GMT -5
OOC: Ok, I will have the same laws, I already read yours over and agree with all of them. One sub board - The River. Another...um...The Dead Forest...?
Dusk
I turned away and started to walk to the center of my land.
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Post by MeMyself&I on May 1, 2009 15:46:45 GMT -5
OOC; kk, and um tell me what sub boards you want and I will make them.
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Post by horsecrav202 on May 1, 2009 15:50:09 GMT -5
OOC: One, The River...and um...the other The Dead Forest...? Does that sound right?  |
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Post by MeMyself&I on May 1, 2009 15:57:46 GMT -5
OOC: it's your choice. And tell me the description
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Post by horsecrav202 on May 1, 2009 16:10:59 GMT -5
OOC: Ok, for the Dead Forest: With almost no sunlight, the Dead Forest is one of the worst places to get lost in. It's dark, cold, and everywhere you look there is trees. Only herd members of The Black River know their way around. It has one small clearing in the center. King Dark's ravens roam here.
For The River: The Black River runs through this side of the land. Beware of the creatures that lurk in the water. They only respect The Black River herd members. The river is only safe for Dark horses to drink. Careful not to slip and fall on the black rocks, it could mean death. This is a very unforgiving place.
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